Sunday, 25 January 2009

suggestion

I quite like Lust electric by Caliban's Dream's

Lust electric
Gentle nibble
Delicate flick
Juices trickle

Tender mouthful
Indulgent sips
Spasms sinful
Gyrating hips

Thrusts entrancing
Feverish pace
Teeth caressing
Deadlock embrace

Lust electric
Unabated
Flesh metallic
Liquidated

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Shame I didn't see this before Friday. I think it's different from what we have. What does anyone say to substituting this for one of the lust pieces chosen - I'd suggest Bright Eyes or New Young Pony Club but the i would, wouldn't I?

3 comments:

  1. I like it :). It's more succinct than some of the others but depends whether the illustrators have been given their words yet or not.

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  2. I like it :). It's more succinct than some of the others but i guess it depends on whether the illustrators have been given poems/lyrics yet.

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  3. yeah that's the one i posted from the poetry website so i'm all for it!

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